Tuesday, 8 July 2014

Took the Children Away - Archie Roach

This story's right, this story's true
I would not tell lies to you
Like the promises they did not keep
And how they fenced us in like sheep.
Said to us come take our hand
Sent us off to mission land.
Taught us to read, to write and pray
Then they took the children away,
Took the children away,
The children away.
Snatched from their mother's breast
Said this is for the best
Took them away.


The welfare and the policeman
Said you've got to understand
We'll give them what you can't give
Teach them how to really live.
Teach them how to live they said
Humiliated them instead
Taught them that and taught them this
And others taught them prejudice.
You took the children away
The children away
Breaking their mothers heart
Tearing us all apart
Took them away


One dark day on Framingham
Come and didn't give a damn
My mother cried go get their dad
He came running, fighting mad
Mother's tears were falling down
Dad shaped up and stood his ground.
He said 'You touch my kids and you fight me'
And they took us from our family.
Took us away
They took us away
Snatched from our mother's breast
Said this was for the best
Took us away.


Told us what to do and say
Told us all the white man's ways
Then they split us up again
And gave us gifts to ease the pain
Sent us off to foster homes
As we grew up we felt alone
Cause we were acting white
Yet feeling black


One sweet day all the children came back
The children come back
The children come back
Back where their hearts grow strong
Back where they all belong
The children came back
Said the children come back
The children come back
Back where they understand
Back to their mother's land
The children come back


Back to their mother
Back to their father
Back to their sister
Back to their brother
Back to their people
Back to their land
All the children come back
The children come back
The children come back
Yes I came back.

The composer of this piece is Archie Roach
The form of this poem is Song Lyrics


The poem is about how the English settlers took the aborigine children away from their parents when they came to colonise Australia. They started teaching the children their traditions and traits. They also unfairly claimed the land that belonged to the aborigines.


The message of this poem is to show how the English settlers were unfair to the aborigines by taking their children away from them to teach them their ways lying to them as well. Archie Roach was one of the children who were taken away


The tone created in the poem mainly how unfair and unjustly the settlers treated the aborigines even though the land belonged to the aborigines. Also the settlers didn't have the right to take their children away.


Some techniques are:
Repetition - "Took the children away" - This phrase is used often to say that they took the children without any actual permission.
Rhyme - "Like the promises they did not keep...And how they fenced us in like sheep"
Image - "He came running fighting mad.....And our mother's tears were fighting mad" - This shows how their father was trying to refrain the settlers from taking the composer and his brothers and sisters.


My opinion of this poem is that this poem clearly shows how even though they were treated unfairly and the hurt emotionally and physically. However they kept their hopes up and the children who were taken away (aka Stolen Generation) came back to their families.


25 comments:

  1. i truly agree, this is one of my favorite songs, it has a great meaning to it, and i can relate it to my own life about being taken away from my family

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  2. love this song, its a great help to my assignment

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  3. Hey um, I thought this was helpful (also doing an assignment) it wasn't incredible but helped start me off! Kepp doing what you're doing! THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO APPR3ECIATE IT! :)

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  4. this is a really helpful analysis. thank you
    I love this song.
    don't let people stop you from doing what you are doing because every one will always have an opinion, but they don't matter.

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  5. Saved my life on an assessment thanks for the help

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  6. you know what's funny is that people only come on here for assignments like me

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  7. it was a poem and then made into a song sooo

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  8. thanks man, helped me a lot, dont listen to thoose ragers who r to lazy to do it themselves, its good

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  9. #Raymond Kang and Daniel

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  10. im using it, and i think its really good too.

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  11. dont worry what people are saying. i copied and pasted your whole summary. wish me luck lmfao

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    1. bro that is plagiarizing but i'll pray for you

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  12. is there and anaphora used i just need to know for an assignment :)

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    1. yeah 'breaking their mother's heart' and 'tearing us all apart' are anaphora.

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